WEEK 13 - CORRECTION ON FYP REPORT IMPROVEMENT



Activity: Writing Draft of the Report

The proposal presentation is done so i have to make a correction to the report based on the comment that assessor suggested. There are some information that i should added for the report which is a previous study on how to calculate the respiration rate based on the formula. I don't have many changes although my assessors are from the Medical Electronics Section. They don't comment more about my medical part but more on the IoT and database.

Based on the assessors comment on my title defense presentation, there a few improvement that need to be taken which are:


1- Sensor upgrade in the device tp monitor the respiration rate

2- Product design need to include the user motion aspect in vigorous activity.

3- The problem statement of the project need to be revise

4- For the expected result, the explanation need to be elaborated further. 

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